User talk:CSunflower30/sandbox/The Feast in the House of Levi

Your lead section is way better than the original, great job summarizing it for the intro to the whole wiki article instead of having it explained in the first paragraph. Good job adding citations to the subject matter/description, it makes your additions more credible. The way you moved some info into the description also helped it and made it easier to comprehend. Good addition of the historical context and the way you organized everything to lead up to the interrogation. One suggestion would maybe be labeling the photos in the subject matter section with a little description as to which one has the drunken germans, slaves, etc. Overall great work, I really think you did a great job! Can’t wait to read the final draft!