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Happy editing! Cheers, Pharaoh of the Wizards (talk) 18:40, 19 July 2023 (UTC)

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I assume we are talking about Chrystabel You have an obvious conflict of interest, please don't write about yourself, your friends or relatives and read the guidance below:

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 * The text was promotional, with opinions instead of real facts like sensual, ethereal... like a nightclub act from a shadow dimension, one that's glamorous and sexy but also on the cusp of cosmic chaos Lynch [her collaborator] has said, Chrystabell is not only a killer performer, she also has a great intuitive ability to catch a mood and find a melody that's really spectacular. The first time I saw her perform, I thought she was like an alien. The most beautiful alien ever. and Chrystabell fully transports listeners into a dimension of her own making with a collision of post-disco, synth-pop and space-age psychedelia. Her unearthly storytelling permeates with a worldly insight, offering up tender instruction for living more ecstatically... a highlight is her astonishing cover of the Psychedelic Furs classic “Love My Way”), marking a fascinating shift in her creative vision - and making for a truly unparalleled modern pop record And there are quotations from you, obviously not a neutral source, like Who wouldn't want to end up here? It's so beautiful


 * It's clear that there were at least two undisclosed paid editors who were involved in writing the article. Anyone who has a financial interest in a topic is a paid editor, even if they are not being made specifically to write the article, and it's required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose an employer, client or other affiliation.

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. If you are writing about yourself, or someone you know as a friend, colleague, client, employer or relative, you have a conflict of interest, and you must disclose the nature of that COI. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 08:18, 21 July 2023 (UTC)


 * Mr. Bleak, "sensual, ethereal... like a nightclub act from a shadow dimension..." was a quote from the wall street journal.
 * "The first time I saw her perform, I thought she was like an alien. The most beautiful alien ever" is a quote by David Lynch from Vanity Fair.
 * If there were other flowery bits added it was not by an editor I paid, I assure you. It makes the most sense that fans make these contributions thinking they are helping me. Can those be parts be removed without having to delete the whole page? I did not originally write my own page but of course I am affected if it is taken down. There are wiki pages about me in many other languages, certainly that could provide some proof of the legitimacy of the one in English since I am American? Chrysta Bell104.35.3.104 (talk) 16:53, 21 July 2023 (UTC)