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Peer Review: Levi
"Chin's early work with DC began with Guy Gardner Warrior [3]. She later progressed to work on a number of variant covers, mini-series, and special projects [3], including Xena: Warrior Princess, Vampirella, Tomb Raider, Red Sonja, and Wynonna Earp [1]." I think you should tell us what she was doing on these. And if not on each specific one you mentioned then definitely on Guy Gardner Warrior. This is the start of her career but it makes it sound like she could be doing anything. Was she a letterer or an inker or a penciller?

The citation appears after the punctuation rather than before it. "[3]." should be ".[3]"

I don't doubt your sources credibility. But I think they don't achieve the scholarly element I think we're supposed to have. Other than that though I think this is great.

Lorenzo Peer Review
Really good so far. I think you cover a good amount of information, and your lead is clear. I think you do a really good job of being objective and presenting the information in a way that's very easy to read. You also do a very good job of providing sources and linking to outside articles. The one thing I would do is add dates. Based on your current article, I have no real idea of when Joyce Chin was born or when she was creating comics. I know this information is contained in the articles that you linked to, but I'd rather not have to click away from your pages to get that information. You could also try to look for a photo to include. Overall, really good job so far. LorenzoEdits (talk) 16:26, 14 November 2018 (UTC)