User talk:Caddiedull/sandbox

Introductory Sentence: Your intro sentence gives a good overview of what your article is about. Good job! Summary: The introduction overall is really good and summarizes the article. Context: Just make sure everything in your intro is covered throughout the article; I think there are a few points in the intro that I did not see in the article itself. Organization: Your article is super organized! The headings make is easy to navigate. Content: You have well developed sections, but the "feminism and dolores" section does not have anything under it. Make sure you add this as it is probably the most important section in regards to this course! Citations: You haven't cited all of sources yet but I know you are planning on doing that :) Sources: The ones you have now look credible, i'm sure the others will be too. Completeness: Almost complete. Brooke Balthrope

Peer review.
I think overall this article is very well written, concise, easy to follow and nearly complete. The only concerns I could mention would be the lack of citations, and the bare feminism section, both of which you previously addressed in the email you sent out. My only question would be about the information included in the summary section. A lot of the summary is about people who worked on the film, and there is very little included about that in the remainder of the article. Perhaps the summary could just be focused on the plot of the documentary, and the producers/directors, etc could be credited in another place such as the sidebar. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tessa.l.cooper (talk • contribs) 16:48, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

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I like how the plot had overall information then was split by the years. The article is very informative and easy to follow. I'm curious, I had just noticed that the movie starred Hillary Clinton and Angela Davis but they were only mentioned in the begging for the interviews is that all they were in? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Schu13 (talk • contribs) 17:11, 27 April 2018 (UTC)