User talk:Caitlinpretzel/C’s Intersectionality and Closeting Communication, LGBTQ+ Intersectionality and Feminism, and QTPOC Intersectional Communication/Bibliography

A's Peer Review for C
Hey C, you have the correct number of sources, but I noticed that two of your sources are not from communication journals and that may cause issues when we get to writing the actual Wikipedia page because it may interfere with the legitimacy of the article. I also noticed that one of your sources is less than 10 pages, but since you have 6 that are over 10 pages, I’m sure that one source will be okay.

You did a good job citing your sources using the DOI number. I noticed that some of the references have red writing about the dates. I had the same issue, but if you go in and remove the month so you only have the year for the date it should resolve that issue.

You did a great job at communicating how your sources will help you to write your sections of the Wikipedia page and answering Dr. E’s prompt. You also have enough sources in each section to properly introduce and support your assigned sections. I can clearly understand your plan for your writing A.B.highland (talk) 17:28, 12 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hey A, thank you for your feedback on my bibliography. I will be looking for a replacement for the non communication articles for my intersectionality and feminism topic. My source that has less than 10 pages will be fine once I replace the non communication articles because I will have more than six. I will also fix the red text about the dates by using your feedback.  Caitlinpretzel (talk) 18:03, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

Dr. E's Review
C, great work overall choosing strong sources and justifying those choices. Source 3 is not COMM, so it will need to be replaced. It is a good source (just not for this Communication Studies page). Please see Canvas and respond to this feedback on Wiki during our workshop time. OsaRosa (talk) 06:35, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hey Dr. E, thank you for your feedback on my sources. I will be replacing source 5 in my QTPOC intersectionality communication topic as well as looking for another source to help round out the topic. I will also be looking for another source for my intersectionality and feminism topic to help make it clearer. Caitlinpretzel (talk) 18:19, 16 April 2024 (UTC)