User talk:Caleb26/sandbox

=Evaluations=

Spelling/Grammar
Everything looks great, but I only have one personal edit. I would probably replace "Furthermore, since the language" with "The Lyonnais dialect" in the sentence "Furthermore, since the language has not been the national language of any country it has not been standardized and as such does not have an established spelling system." So I would edit it a little further saying "The Lyonnais dialect has not been the national language of any country, therefore it has not been standardized and as such does not have an established spelling system." Just a personal preference thing. It's probably fine the way it is as well. Other than that, everything looks great! Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 01:59, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Language
Looks good Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 01:59, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Organization
Very well organized Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 02:00, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Coding
Looks good Great use of links to other wikipedia pages. Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 02:01, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Validity
Looks valid to me

Completion
Looks complete to me

Relevance
Very relevant, and a neat topic. Paul E. Hubbard (talk) 02:01, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

1/29/2018 Evaluation by Bportis
I think this is a very important addition to the Lyon page, great job!


 * Grade: 'A'

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard I would change the part that says " It has been suggested that since there is a significant amount of "phonological variation" that this has made the language mutually unintelligible even for people who live a short distance from each other.[1] " by saying "and" instead of "that" here ""phonological variation" and this has made the language..."

Everything else looks good!

Language
Exceeds standard Good use of a neutral language and no contractions.

Organization
Exceeds standard. Great header and paragraph.

Coding
Exceeds standard. Good usage of links to other Wikipedia pages.

Validity
Meets standard. Everything looks great. Solid information.

Completion
Meets standard. Very close to complete with only 1 edit needed!

Relevance
Meets standard. Very relevant information, this is important to the Lyon page!

Shayla's Peer Review
Language[edit source] Almost meets Expectations. I only found a few grammatical errors, for example I would suggest adding commas after these phrases: "Furthermore, since the language has not been the national language of any country..." and " In France, Franco-Provençal has only been recognized as a "language of France" ". I would suggest revising: "with only possibly 50,000 to 60,000 speakers remaining within France." and changing the word 'within' to 'in'. Also, I would suggest revising: "since the language has not been the national language of any country..." and replacing the word 'language' to 'it' to reduce redundancy.

Organization[edit source] Exceeds standard. Information is clearly laid out in a neat way that is easy to follow. Coding[edit source] Perfect

Validity[edit source] Meets standard.

Completion[edit source] Almost meets standard. Would suggest the language edits above for completeness.

Relevance[edit source] Meets standard.

Sources[edit source] Meets standard.

Citations[edit source] Exceeds Expectations. Each sentence has at least once citation at the end of it to make sure that all information covered is appropriated referenced.

References[edit source] Meets standard. Contains a proper reference list.

Ending Notes: Great job Caleb! I love languages, so really enjoyed reading about a French dialect that I didn't know existed! Great information that is sourced. Keep it up! Shaywah (talk) 18:28, 30 January 2018 (UTC)Shayla