User talk:Calebdb01/sandbox

Peer Review (Braden Giesecke): The draft has a good use of it's citations. There are a few points in the draft that have an unnecessary comma.BradenLG2000 (talk) 15:28, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

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Who knew you could have an online funeral service?? Interesting stuff. Again, be sure your final work is free of errors before you upload to the mainspace.JAirhart 20:53, 12 March 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)

Peer Review- kyle long
Good draft Caleb. The information seems credible. Definitely an interesting piece of information. There are some unneeded commas and filler words in your text. besides fixing that you have a great paragraph.Kyle.long098 (talk) 15:27, 13 March 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kyle.long098 (talk • contribs) 12:13, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

Your word choice is really good. However, in the third sentence you put "there" and I believe you meant to put "their". Other then that, you do have great sources and your draft is very well written. Frich25 (talk) 13:51, 13 March 2019 (UTC)