User talk:Caleclark13/sandbox

You have identified some important features of the park. Rather than list them all in a couple of sentences, expand the description of each feature. You can add some headings to the page to organize your descriptions more effectively. Good start! Christiancyoung (talk) 22:24, 5 December 2017 (UTC)

I would also recommend adding a link to the Milwaukee Recreation page for the park: http://milwaukeerecreation.net/rec/Programs/Outdoor-Education/Hawthorn-Glen.htm Christiancyoung (talk) 16:58, 13 December 2017 (UTC)