User talk:Calhobbs11/sandbox

Nice work! Reading the original article, I definitely agree that this is a relevant addition, since it has hardly anything on protein NMR.

You've done a great job researching the topic. I liked the intro sentence explaining NMR. It is a little bit hard for me to understand as you go into more detail, so any small tweaks to help that would be beneficial.

The flow was great. I liked that you had an intro, discussion on different techniques, disadvantages of NMR, and an example of its application. Also, nice job linking terms and integrating references.

One of the easiest sections to understand was when you talked about limitations of NMR compared to other techniques. I thought it would also be nice to talk about the benefits of NMR in comparison with other techniques, as well. Then you could even consider putting that info at the start of the section, before diving into the types of NMR etc.

It will still need a figure (like where most of ours are at right now, I think).

Nice work! This is a really interesting and relevant topic, and I think you're doing a great job on it.Vazi97 (talk) 17:02, 24 November 2020 (UTC)