User talk:CaliLandscapes63

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (August 30)
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🇺🇦 Fiddle Timtrent  Faddle Talk to me 🇺🇦 22:15, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Albert L. Altman (September 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Qcne were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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 Qcne  (talk)  19:19, 1 September 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Albert L. Altman (September 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Albert L. Altman and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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 Qcne  (talk)  20:45, 1 September 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Albert L. Altman (September 5)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

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 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Albert L. Altman and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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 Qcne  (talk)  18:30, 5 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Qcne,
 * I thought I put in all the new citations you suggested this morning by editing each section after clicking on the above item Draft:Albert L. Altman (note in purple front). Did these not save? Also, I just eliminated the first paragraph below sources, since I don't think that list was necessary given the automatically generated numbered sources in the entry that includes all those in the paragraph and more. CaliLandscapes63 (talk) 18:48, 5 September 2023 (UTC)