User talk:Callalily4/Evaluate an Article

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Psychology_in_the_medieval_Islamic_world

I love history so this article made sense for me. This article relates my personal interest and psychology.

The lead for this article is well balanced. The reader is given the perfect amount of information in the first sentence, and in the paragraph as a whole. It is concise, yet detailed. The content is well thought out and has a neutral tone overall. There was not any information that could be considered irrelevant regarding the topic. The Islamic people groups outlined in this article are underrepresented in the Western world, even more so in science. This article provides the reader with a through knowledge of what these scientists knew. I previously stated that the overall tone is neutral, and that stands for the article as a whole. The cited links that I clicked on did work. The sources are trustworthy and reputable. There is also a good mix of first hand accounts from these medieval scientists as well as more recent articles analyzing their work. The talk page for this article was extremely interesting to me. This WikiProject lasted from August 2021 to December 2021. The comments left on the talk page were constructive and well thought out. They addressed verbiage issues (what to call certain people/things), I think this helped the article have a neutral tone. My overall impression was impressed. This is a topic that I am sure was not particularly easy to find sources of and these people did a great job! The article is well developed, but there is room for more. There could be a section on what a psychiatric ward looked like and operated in the Medieval world.