User talk:Calthinus/Irreligion in Albania

Feedback please
Hey, I'm still awaiting your input on what specifically was OR. In the meantime I moved my work into my sandbox here and expanded as well as tried to look for things that might have been OR or SYN. What do you think of the current version? --Yalens (talk) 18:14, 15 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi, Yalens. Apologies, but I've been stuck on other articles and IRL for the last week or so. I've bookmarked this draft and will get onto helping to tighten it up ASAP. If I don't respond in a couple of days, give me another big ping and slap me with a trout!


 * Prior any kind of 'tidy', however, the general problem is that you've added a lot of detail which is WP:OFFTOPIC: the prime minister's personal belief/lack of belief system, homophobia and irreligion, etc. Remember, Wikipedia articles are not essays. You're collating various bits and pieces of information related to irreligion is Albania and creating an essay. It is, essentially, a breach of WP:NOR. --Iryna Harpy (talk) 22:16, 17 June 2017 (UTC)


 * Re response time, yeah that's understandable and sure, and I do appreciate your time. Heads of state that openly state they don't believe in an organized religion are relatively rare across most of the world, especially in parts of the world where the parts of the population that openly declare "atheism" (or agnosticism if it's on census) are not that high. Is that, and societal dynamics involving irreligion, not relevant to a page about irreligion? Additionally, doesn't an article typically discuss the relation of various other entities/phenomena to its topic? Irreligion in Romania, for example, discusses things like this. I mean I could understand it being a breach of WP:OR if there was WP:SYN introduced, which I've tried to check for here, but forgive me but I can't exactly understand what the issue is here. Mere juxtaposition explicitly does not consistute SYNTH. Is there an inline example you could point at for what specifically here is a violation of OR, if you don't mind? (I think that would be helpful)--Yalens (talk) 06:06, 18 June 2017 (UTC)


 * Uff! That hurt... but it was deserved. Happy editing! --Iryna Harpy (talk) 00:39, 10 July 2017 (UTC)