User talk:Calvin2804/User:Calvin2804/sandbox/Ibetpz Peer Review

Ibetpz (talk) 15:21, 3 May 2022 (UTC) -what article does well? Did well with giving examples of multiple actors' experiences.

-what impress you? articles information relates very well with new draft.

-a phase that describes the subject clear. this phase describes the subject...The first time it was ever seen on film was in 1951's A Streetcar Named Desire by young actor Marlon Brando. Changing the course of acting forever, with his portal more male actors wanted to be seen as masculine not fine and polished.

-what changes and why? add citations of where you found information.

-important thing to do for improvement? citation is very important to back up your statements.

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