User talk:Camberwellggs

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Camberwell_Girls_Grammar_School
G'day,

I've undone one of your recent edits to the CGGS article. I gather from your username that you work with the school in some fashion, so I really want you to read through WP:COI, and be aware that it may be an issue for you.

The main problem that I had with the content that you put forward was that it was in breach of WP:PEACOCK and presented information in a non-neutral point of view in breach of WP:NPOV. Saying that a school "enable[s]" students to be "confident creative people and active citizens" is too positively-nuanced language to use on wikipedia. Saying that the school has strong academic results isn't OK without speaking relative to some sort of standard (and using a reference). These are examples of what is problematic, but there are many more throughout the text that you entered.

Please be aware of WP:NOTADVERTISING. If you are looking to improve the school's image, as it appears on wikipedia, creating a more comprehensive and detailed article is the better way to go. Take a look at Good Education Articles in Australia for some examples of what good articles look like.

Last, WP:WPSCH has done a lot of work on some guidelines for school articles, which I strongly suggest that you read through and follow. These are available at WP:WPSCH/AG. If you have any questions, please feel free to get in touch with me on my talkpage.  &tilde;danjel [ talk | contribs ] 04:36, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

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