User talk:Camimitchell35/sandbox

Cameron, you've done an excellent job on getting this together. Please make sure you are including Victoria in your planning and explaining to her how to use WP. She seems to be struggling. Thanks! --Dr AB Swan (talk) 16:50, 16 February 2019 (UTC)

After some investigating, it looks like your addition to the Nature Therapy page was removed because it was a primary source. Remember from your medical page training, in which therapy articles fall, that you should find secondary sources, rather than primary sources. I will incorporate what you did add in my final evaluation of your contribution, so don't think this is a loss. I am happy to discuss this in person with you and Victoria to see what we can find elsewhere. --Dr AB Swan (talk) 18:10, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

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It seems what you have done here looks great! As I read through the article I found that it could use more depth in the history and how nature therapy can be benefical to someone. Also what are tha range exericses and tasks that one would perform for nature therapy? Overall, this article looks great and I think youre doing a great job, however, by adding these features I've listed above I think it could be a strong article!

Mdarrow18 (talk) 17:19, 22 March 2019 (UTC)Madison Darrow