User talk:CamperDans

Love in Bright Landscapes : The Story of David McComb of the Triffids. moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Love in Bright Landscapes : The Story of David McComb of the Triffids., is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs to be formatted to WP:MOS standards. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 04:46, 26 August 2022 (UTC)

New article
Hi - I noticed your article yesterday and I'm not surprised it has been moved back to draftspace, as there are several things that need tidying up. The huge picture and long list of credits right at the beginning certainly doesn't help convince an admin that this article is ready... for a start, this all needs to go in an Infobox film infobox and the picture size reduced. Also remove any wording such as "critically acclaimed", "prize winning", "powerful testimony", etc. as these are considered MOS:PEACOCK terms. More independent citations are needed as well to show how the film is notable, rather than a long description of the content and contributors. I suggest you look at the articles Monterey Pop, Summer of Soul and The Beatles: Eight Days a Week as guides for how an article about a music documentary film should be laid out and structured. Richard3120 (talk) 15:08, 26 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your feedback Richard. This is the first page i've submitted so it's useful.
 * Reducing the pic size is fine/easy, we've included numerous independent citations but will work through more. As per the original advisement on moving the page to draft space there's some time to make these changes and we'll work through them gradually. CamperDans (talk) 12:55, 28 August 2022 (UTC)