User talk:Camsara99/sandbox

Instructor Feedback on Evaluate an Article Exercise
Good work, Camsara99! You're absolutely right that this article needs a TON of work, there's definitely a reason that it's categorized as a stub-class article. One of the aspects I can help clarify is that this page is about the mythological/legendary figure named Sparta, not the collective body of mythology relevant to the city of Sparta. If that's a deal-breaker for you and you're more interested in foundation mythologies or prominent cults in Sparta, there are many other pages that might be of interest, including: Carnea, Heracleidae, Amyclas, Lacedaemon, Eurotas (the latter three are also really bad and you could probably improve both of those AND the Sparta mythology page with the exact same sources). Or you can create a page for Athena Chalkioikos, or work on the sanctuary of Artemis Orthia or the Menelaion. For your copy-editing exercise due this week you won't be able to do the Sparta (mythology) page because there's so little on there, so consider copy-editing one of the suggestions I made above to see if any of those pique your interest. For the add a sentence/citation exercise you can absolutely add to the Sparta (mythology) page. Let me know if you have any questions! Gardneca (talk) 15:39, 2 February 2021 (UTC)