User talk:Candyyeung168/Chile Ridge

A comment on the draft
Hi Candyyeung168,

You are pretty thorough with reference foot notes, but the User:Candyyeung168/Chile Ridge section has no reference.

Also what is the most exciting thing in once sentence that you can say about Chile Ridge? I am looking for a "hook" sentence that will tempt people to want to read your page. You may think what would I tell my mother about this topic for a clue. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 05:28, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

Comment from Andy
In the second sentence of introduction, 'It extends from the southeastern part of Eastern Island and the southern coast of Chile.' You mean Easter Island? Summary of the segments of Chile Ridge is incomplete... and the 'stacked' link of segment N9N is probably wrong? In Bathymetry section...which is the submarine topography that studyies the depths of landforms under the water level...' In figure 8, a key that shows colors with corresponding magnitudes is better... — Preceding unsigned comment added by LklAndy (talk • contribs) 07:12, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments from Jasmine
Nicely annotated diagrams with great consistency with the descriptions!

I think you can start each paragraph with a thesis statement before you jump into the explanations -some of them have and some of them don't.

The part "General geology" is a bit confusing to me because the introduction of that session focuses much on Taitao Peninsula and ophiolites but you have "Geology of the Chile Margin" and "Geology of Chile Ridge" at the bottom on the same session. Perhaps you can consider sorting them a bit.

I don't think you need to repeat adding links to the words that appear the second time (the blueinks).

Comments from Christy
The explanation of the tectonic plate movement related to the Chile Ridge is clear! I suggest that you can add a table to show the timeline of the tectonic event.

The 3D models which show the slab window evolution are very detailed and descriptive. I suggest that you can add some simple and short annotations to the models to explain the processes. You can add "no new lithospheric crust is formed after subduction" to the diagram to show why the gap is formed.