User talk:Cannons10

Your submission at Articles for creation
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Mrmatiko (talk) 20:11, 14 February 2012 (UTC)

There are several key things that concern me/that you can do:
 * 1) The article relies too heavily on extremely positive quotes
 * 2) "She continued to grow as a dancer" isn't really very neutral or encyclopedic
 * 3) ditto "graced the cover", "extremely versatile" and "DDS also conducted an exclusive interview"

I would also suggest removing the empty tags from the top of the article --Mrmatiko (talk) 20:27, 14 February 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! B  music  ian  06:59, 15 February 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Natalia Alonso, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:00, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
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