User talk:Cansail

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mike Toppa (January 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Raydann was:

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 ❯❯❯  Raydann  (Talk)   07:30, 10 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the feedback. I was basing this article on other sailor bios that have already been accepted by Wikipedia, e.g., https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ken_Read_(sailor) and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dennis_Conner.
 * I did include two independent news sources and did a careful fact-check.
 * Is there a specific paragraph that was a red flag, or just the general tone?
 * Thank you. 2600:8805:BD80:46:61AB:D25A:1228:7FB5 (talk) 19:04, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
 * PS This is cansail, forgot to log in before posting. Thx Cansail (talk) 19:06, 10 January 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mike Toppa (January 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Modussiccandi was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Mike Toppa and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Mike_Toppa Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Modussiccandi&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Mike_Toppa reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Modussiccandi (talk) 15:51, 28 January 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Mike Toppa
Hello, Cansail. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Mike Toppa, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 16:02, 30 June 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Mike Toppa


Hello, Cansail. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Mike Toppa".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 16:02, 28 July 2023 (UTC)