User talk:Cantoncic/sandbox

It would be helpful to know what Prize Linked Savings Accounts are. There should be a definition and several examples. When did they originate? What was the motivation behind their development? How many exist? How do they work? This is a start but it needs significant more work. Cassell04 (talk) 18:24, 7 October 2018 (UTC)

I think that so far you are off to a good start. I feel like the wiki links you provided are necessary, and help me develop a better understanding of what you are trying to say. However, I think that you could be a little bit more clear in explaining some of your points. For example, when you say, "it is nearly impossible for any individual to fathom odds in the millions as our day to day lives deal with quantities going no higher than a few thousand" I am not entirely sure what you mean. Also, your references could be a little stronger. Blogspot is not a credible resource to use. Try searching for something on Google Scholar or the Kent Discovery database. Ssmit216 (talk) 02:41, 16 October 2018 (UTC)

Article is off to a good start, although it seems short and needs more expanding. Your sources are good and provide an essential background of key definitions that further bring your point home. I think more credible sources are necessary on a topic like this and can help make the argument you're trying to make more credible. Once you expand more on how and why these systems developed in the first place. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Seth Fangman (talk • contribs) 18:56, 16 October 2018 (UTC)

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Article is off to a good start, although it seems short and needs more expanding. Your sources are good and provide an essential background of key definitions that further bring your point home. I think more credible sources are necessary on a topic like this and can help make the argument you're trying to make more credible. Once you expand more on how and why these systems developed in the first place. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Seth Fangman (talk • contribs) 18:54, 16 October 2018 (UTC)