User talk:Caonashi

I live in Hilo, HI and attend DKICP.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel K. Inouye College of Pharmacy (January 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

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 Onel 5969  TT me 14:09, 26 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel K. Inouye College of Pharmacy (January 29)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

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SwisterTwister  talk  04:40, 29 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel K. Inouye College of Pharmacy (February 3)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

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LaMona (talk) 20:28, 3 February 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Daniel K. Inouye College of Pharmacy has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Daniel K. Inouye College of Pharmacy. Thanks! LaMona (talk) 21:47, 11 February 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel K. Inouye College of Pharmacy (February 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Justlettersandnumbers was:

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Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 16:56, 12 February 2016 (UTC)

Article accepted
Hi. There was a bit of a mix-up at Articles for Creation and your article got rejected before I could accept it. But I've worked it out with the other reviewer, and accepted your article. You will find it now under Daniel K. Inouye College of Pharmacy. Note that because you are closely connected to the college, you should declare that on the talk page (I'll leave below all of the instructions about that), and should avoid further editing of the article except to fix obvious details, like dates or names. LaMona (talk) 17:35, 12 February 2016 (UTC)

Conflict of Interest
(As promised, rules to follow)

Hello, Caonashi. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. In particular, please:


 * avoid editing or creating articles related to you and your circle, your organization, its competitors, projects or products;
 * instead propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (see the request edit template);
 * when discussing affected articles, disclose your COI (see WP:DISCLOSE);
 * avoid linking to the Wikipedia article or website of your organization in other articles (see WP:SPAM);
 * exercise great caution so that you do not violate Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation (see WP:PAID).

Please familiarize yourself with relevant policies and guidelines, especially those pertaining to neutral point of view, sourcing and autobiographies. Thank you. LaMona (talk) 17:36, 12 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Caonashi would you please acknowledge receipt of the above? Also, please read WP:BOOSTER.   You can reply here, as I am watching this page.  Jytdog (talk) 15:24, 19 February 2016 (UTC)

Acknowledged Caonashi (talk) 23:25, 20 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi Caoniashi. Have you read the COI guideline?  If so, why are you continuing to edit the article directly?   Do tell.  Thanks. Jytdog (talk) 01:27, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Hello. I was editing the portions of which I thought you were requesting that I improve/edit.Caonashi (talk) 02:02, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
 * based on your note at the article talk page, you understand that you should not directly edit. that is great. Jytdog (talk) 03:02, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
 * btw, if you want to understand why we have this guideline, i would be happy to explain. if you are getting a degree at the school and go into the field, you should go in with a keen awareness of what COI is in the real world, as well as in WP.  The same notions apply. Jytdog (talk) 03:03, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Mahalo for your help, Jytdog. I read quite a bit into COI and also the discussion on your page about initiating the investigation of your own COI. I found that part interesting and although I'd like to be able to dispel whatever concerns there may exist with my COI, I don't think the idea of everyone self-initiating investigations is practical. Caonashi (talk) 05:05, 21 February 2016 (UTC)