User talk:Caowei823/sandbox

I find some mistake in your article. the identity in the first sentence; I think you should type identities. The somepeople in the third sentences you should type some person; the backgroud in forth sentence should be background; the Lose Angeles need become Los Angeles; the type in seventh sentence should use past form typed; the release also should become released, the make should become made.BTW, the poingt should be point.LiRuiQing (talk) 18:44, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

'who is a television personality, and arrive at CNN on February,1,2013.'  I think the 'is' should be  changes to 'was', the 'arrive' should be  changed to 'arrived'. 'It cause the police to mount a widespread manhunt for Dorner, the area was from California to include Nevada and Mexico.'   I think the 'cause' should be  changed to 'caused'. 'The police said the need protected more then 40 potential targets of Dorner's.'   I think you want to say 'they' not the 'the'.

This article has an error in this frace: "that poverty was so normally" you need put this "that poverty was too normal". LupithaGarcia (talk) 18:43, 26 February 2015 (UTC)