User talk:Captainmoondog


 * And as it says, Do not remove this unblock review while you are blocked. --jpgordon&#x1d122;&#x1d106;&#x1D110;&#x1d107; 23:10, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

Fortnite Battle Royale 'The concept of the game is similar to previous games of the genre: 100 players skydive onto an island and scavenge for gear to defend themselves from other players. Players can fight alone, or with up to four other players. As the match progresses, the playable area within the island gradually constricts, giving the players less and less room to work with; outside this safe zone is "the Storm", which inflicts damage on those caught inside it, with the amount of damage growing as the Storm itself does. The last player or team alive wins the match. The main distinction from others in the genre is the game's construction elements, letting players build walls, obstacles, and other structures from collected resources to take cover from incoming fire or give one a strategic view advantage. Battle Royale uses a seasonal approach with battle passes to introduce new character customization content in the game, as well as limited-time events, some of which correspond with changes to the game map. Since its initial release, several other game modes have been introduced, including "Battle Lab" and "Party Royale".' outside this safe zone is 'the Storm', which inflicts damage on those caught inside it, with the amount of damage growing as the Storm itself does."

Error: "outside this safe zone is 'the Storm', which inflicts damage on those caught inside it, with the amount of damage growing as the Storm itself does." Correction: Outside this safe zone is 'The Storm,' which inflicts damage on those caught inside it, with the amount of damage increasing as The Storm advances. Explanation: I made two changes here. First, I capitalized "The Storm" to give it a more proper noun-like appearance, which is common in gaming terminology. Secondly, I replaced "growing as the Storm itself does" with "increasing as The Storm advances" for better clarity and to maintain consistency in the wording.

A spelling change and a grammar change does not comply with "Propose significant and well researched improvements by editing the selected portion of the article. Please note that we are not looking for basic typo corrections, or small unreferenced additions; your edits should be substantial, and reflect relevant policies." 331dot (talk) 07:53, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

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I have blocked and ✅ sock,. --Yamla (talk) 11:23, 7 October 2023 (UTC)