User talk:Capttimit/sandbox

Yunpeng's peer review
Opening paragraph: The opening paragraph talks about the function of the Shenyang Taoxian airport and the passenger traffic information. I can know the importance of the topic by reading this paragraph. Add some information about how important the transit and the future plans are. Is there any issue that need to be improved in the future?

Structure: Regarding the structure of the article, the future plan section can be put after the transit section because it’s a general future prediction about the article.

Balance: Each section of the article has a proper length. It includes all aspects of an airport. Maybe too much details about the price in transit section. The details are a little distractive. Some other aspects of the transit such as the future plans can be talked about.

Neutrality: Since the article talks about the information about an airport based on various news and reports, it provides a neutral point of view.

Reliable sources: Most of the sources come from the news on websites. Considering the topic of the article, the source is neutral and acceptable. The sentences in the article need to be labeled with numbers to show the sources they use.

This article provides a comprehensive overview of an airport in China. By using lots of numbers, this article shows the importance of the Shenyang Taoxian Airport. One of the suggestions is to discuss more information about the airlines that use the airport. What cities can these airlines fly to from this airport? Furthermore, there are many terms in the article that can be explained by other Wikipedia articles. In this case, internal links can be added to these terms which could help readers better understand the content. Yunpeng Liu (talk) 03:05, 6 December 2018 (UTC)