User talk:Careyb2

hello Careyb2 (talk) 14:23, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

article
You asked me to comment on the article you are working on: I made some general comments on my talk p., and more extensive & detailed ones on Talk:Military Families Speak Out. And remember to always sign your postings on talk pages.  DGG ( talk ) 20:52, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Just checking in
Hi! My name is Cindy and I am working with Ed this semester to support the Political Participation course, taught by Professor Tess Marchant-Shapiro. I can be reached either through my talk page, email, or on IRC at #wikipedia-en-classroom. Please feel free to contact either myself or Ed any time you have a question. We are both here to help and look forward to working with you! Best regards,  Cind.   amuse  (Cindy) 07:50, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Review
You article looks good, you have basic informaton regarding the history of your group and clearified their collective action as well. A couple of things your article lacked included cited sources five sections in which your article would be divided into. Despite, citation and section problem your article appears to show that you demonstrated general knowledge of the article you choose to expand upon. Winstonhry (talk) 05:59, 5 December 2011 (UTC)