User talk:Carissmav/sandbox

There should be some sources on Paranthropus aethiopicus diet! Great start, please add more on this and find sources.

Hi Carissa! I think your post is great. I enjoyed reading it. One recommendation would be to lengthen the lead. Great job. ---Gabriela Rangel — Preceding unsigned comment added by Grang001 (talk • contribs) 04:21, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi Carissa. Overall great start to your article. You provided more information on the background of this hominin that was missing in the original article. You also provided multiple viewpoints and kept everything neutral. I would suggest adding more information to each section below the lead. There are some sections that only have 1-2 sentences. Adding more information to each section would make your article flourish. I provided more detailed reviews on the peer review page for your article. Dhern041 (talk) 05:35, 16 May 2020 (UTC)dhern041