User talk:Carl67lp/Cyberstalking legislation

Feedback on Cyberstalking article
This is an interesting and substantive start. Please review the subsection "At the federal level"; the last sentence in the first paragraph does not seem to make sense, I suppose there is something missing. Likewise, the sentence on the United Kingdom is confusing, maybe rephrase. Lastly, the Convention on Cybercrime is, strictly speaking, just that: a convention. It does not have the status of international law per se but needs to be ratified by countries that signed the convention (only 25 countries have done that so far). In any case, it would be great if you could explain what concept in the Convention relates to cyberstalking. --JMBauer (talk) 03:20, 30 April 2011 (UTC)

Prof. Bauer, I'm focusing only on the US; the parts you see are from the original stub/article. I'll probably clean those areas up, but I'm not planning on expanding them. Carl67lp (talk) 23:50, 30 April 2011 (UTC)