User talk:Carld92

Campus Sexual Assault
Hi. Welcome.

I rolled back your recent efforts on Campus sexual assault, but the work is not lost - it's in the history if we can solve some issues. Here are some concerns:


 * 1) The Lede paragraph is not the place for statistics related to national, lifetime assault rates.  The article is about colleges/universities, so that would be a detail somewhere in the article for context.  Also, there's been a long debate about what stats to use that preceded you, so we would not want just a single estimate so predominant in the lede, which is why there's a range now.
 * 2) Sources:  You introduced a lot of material from an advocacy group. Read up on reliable sources, WP:RS.  An advocacy group is not considered a source, unless the article is about the group.  Then we can bring in some of the material.
 * 3) Details on alcohol - nothing wrong with the source, but it's a matter of detail and weight in the article.  Editorially, it was too much, and tangential.

Don't fret about the rollback.Mattnad (talk) 20:00, 10 December 2015 (UTC)