User talk:Carlene05/Creating a user sub page

Posting after a comment on #wikipedia-en-help on IRC: DigitalC (talk) 23:24, 13 May 2011 (UTC)
 * I would remove "'Leadership in Energy and Environmental Design (LEED) is an internationally recognized building certification program. It provides certification that a building was designed and built using energy and water efficiency reduction and environmentally responsible resources" and just wikilink to LEED in the paragraph above.
 * "Uptown is considered a catalyst for the future of development in the Capital Region of Victoria" & WP:NPOV. Who considers it a catalyst?
 * "Victoria’s largest employers are the Provincial and Federal Governments as well as the Vancouver Island Health Authority and the University of Victoria" - rmv. This article is about Uptown, not about Victoria.
 * "Sustainability features include:" ... 3rd party source please.
 * References - using inline citations makes it much easier for people to make sure the content is verifiable. See Referencing_for_beginners