User talk:Carlylewin/Spirit children

Tess: I think your lead is very strong.It gives a quick to the point summary of what the spirit children are. I thought the statistics you included of the relevance of this topic were great. I think it emphasizes the importance of the topic and why it should be studied. I would be curious to know if these activist organizations have achieved wide spread public awareness. I would also be curious to know if the Ghanian government has ever thought to interfere. I think your overall structure is great. I would maybe add a historical section, like if we know when this started and such. Maybe a page centering on government/policy initiatives if any. I really lie the activist organizations and media attention section. Maybe the over arching title could be challenges to the practice of spirit children or something. It may also be interesting if you had a section explaining the prevalence of these practices more broadly in Africa. Overall i think this is a great start!

Nick: I like the brief synopsis you have about the issue of spirit children. I like the statistics you included, maybe add a little more about how spirit children have impacted Ghana. Potentially add more about what non-profits are doing to stop the practice and how this practice is portrayed in national media. I would also want more information about what the Ghanian government is doing to prevent the practice. Overall, I think your tone, structure, and content thus far is good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nzoch123 (talk • contribs) 16:21, 14 November 2020 (UTC)