User talk:Carol7288/sandbox

Carol7288 This looks really good. I like that you added a new photo. Make sure you remember to keep or edit the lead that's already on the page; that seems to be the only thing missing from your sandbox article. You may also want to format your headings with the first word capitalized and any following words in lower case: Early life, Suffrage activism, Later years, See also, etc. Keep up the good work! Tillyaceous (talk) 18:20, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Carol7288, I like this page. Two questions, one - is this different than the Edith Houghton found on this page? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edith_Houghton If so, maybe a disambiguation is necessary?

Secondly, An introduction outlining the major themes and accomplishments may be helpful.

Great work! anthonycsiracusa

talk Thanks much for your suggestion about adding more to the lead and changing the headings to lower case! Much Appreciated Carol7288 (talk) 20:24, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

anthonycsiracusa Thanks much for your suggestions about clarifying the two Edith Houghton's and I'll eventually be working on the lead/intro as well! Carol7288 (talk) 20:29, 28 November 2018 (UTC)