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Article Evaluation
Notes from my observations and learnings Mass incarceration The article is off to a good start and all subjects rely back to the title but the ordering of the sections dont make sense The section on women and mass incarceration could be worked on. The first paragraph bave a reallty small section on early incarceration. The sections should be reedited since it somewhat feel as if the sections were throughly researched.