User talk:CarolineMichel2018

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (May 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Theroadislong (talk) 14:46, 10 May 2018 (UTC)

Username, disclosure and draft
As I said over IRC, since you are not Caroline Michel, please request a change of username so that your username doesn't imply you are someone you're not. You can find the relevant policy at WP:IMPERSONATE (that's a section of the username policy; you may want to check out the rest before choosing a new username).

Please also review the disclosure requirements for paid editors at WP:COIPAYDISCLOSE and make sure you comply with them.

Regarding your draft, Wikipedia content should be a summary of what reliable sources that are independent of the subject have reported about her, sources like newspapers or reputable magazines. Your draft provides no such sources. Its tone is what you'd expect from a CV published on LinkedIn whose purpose is to promote the subject, not the dry, neutral tone of an encyclopedia. Huon (talk) 15:58, 10 May 2018 (UTC)