User talk:CarolineRothstein

Your submission at Articles for creation: Victor Salvi (March 24)
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Re Victor Salvi

 * Hello Caroline. I accepted your article. It's been on our list of missing music encyclopedia topics for years! It needs some improvements, but nothing that can't be fixed by a good copy editor. You could get a start on it yourself. I suggest reading Manual of Style/Words to watch. You also need to add a few more inline citations, especially for the awards and the personal life section. Best wishes, Voceditenore (talk) 20:12, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

Thank you so much for accepting the article. I'm thrilled to hear someone was looking to do it! Please let me know what/how I can do to improve the inline citations.

I also found out Salvi was just named "Cavaliere deel'Ordine "al Merito della Repubblica Italiana" the equivalent of the english "Sir" in Italy." - so that should be added as well.

Looking forward to your recommendations.

Thanks! Caroline — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.175.108.74 (talk) 20:32, 17 April 2014 (UTC)