User talk:Caroline Mack

Thats great, thanks. i think i understand - does that mean I have 7 days to make improvements and then after the 7 days is up i will be contacted if the page is going to stay or be deleted and can appeal then? I'm sorry for my confusion!Caroline Mackay (talk) 16:15, 30 June 2011 (UTC)


 * At the moment at the end of the seven days the article will be deleted unless improvement is made. Reichsfürst (talk) 16:19, 30 June 2011 (UTC)

Im sorry, can you advise me what still needs to be changed? I have added lots of links from reputable websites where they relate to sections of text, i have added info about notability (the fact thatr the brand was the first to launch stylish accessories for technology items in the UK) and I have used more simple language when describing the brand to emulate the Wikipedia tone. I would really appreciuate any specific suggestions you can make! Caroline Mackay (talk) 13:52, 4 July 2011 (UTC)