User talk:Caroline t04/sandbox

Caroline Peer Review
Your draft at the bottom is a good outline for what you will be discussing in your article. You should include sources for facts listed in the diet section as some of your statements do not appear to have a source and need one to be considered credible. I like the fact that you also inlcuded the text from the original wikipedia article to show how you were expanding on what was already there. Of course this is a rough outline and needs to be expanded on, more sources and details will likely be added as you work, but it is progress in the right direction and works as a good foundation for what is to come.