User talk:Carolineconnor/sandbox

Hey Caroline, This section is really good and has a lot of information! I think you grasp the reproductive freedom that is addressed in the confrence as well as what was introduced into the ERA. It might be helpful to add the people who introduced the reproductive rights to the floor of the conference. Also a title would be nice to add so that peopel woud be able to have more sepcific information. Also it would be helpful to connect your article more links on wiki then Roe vs Wade. Connectin the article to the wiki page for the ERA, 1977 Conference and the reproductive freedom page. If you connect to these three pages it would allow your page to pop up more so you will have more people drawn to your page. It is extremely well written and has a lot of important information!! Good Job!!!