User talk:Carolineee90/sandbox

Cynthia's Peer Review
I feel that your article is good, but it could use some improvement. One thing you did well in is keeping the article neutral and connecting to the article's topic. Something you can improve in is adding some examples of how social media has influence not only the fans, but also the K-pop stars. Another thing to considering adding is the impact of each social media has had or the type of social media that is prevalent in the K-pop world. The second paragraph was distracting to me because I didn't see the connect it had with the article. Ladykayyy1 (talk) 06:33, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Hkim856 (talk) 15:18, 19 October 2018 (UTC) Your article has a clear niche, but I don't see the second paragraph fitting nicely as well. What does the specific example do for the reader? Also, I'm curious about how you envision your draft will be placed in the existing article.