User talk:Carolinefreeman/sandbox

Overall, I think the changes you suggested for this article are all valid and will help to improve the article. I think your decision to further develop the section on concrete is a smart idea because it looks like concrete was an extremely important feature of the architecture of the period. I also agree that it is important to add more about Greek architecture to give the reader context for how the two styles were similar, and ultimately, how they differed. While I agree that the section on infrastructure is somewhat long and could potentially be its own article, I don't think it necessarily needs to be fully taken out because the inventions and improvements implemented by Romans to their infrastructure were important to their societal advancements. I think you could go either way with the section. In addition, it is evident that your changes are founded in scholarly research. Your improvements to the article are very good and will definitely make the article much stronger.

Carolinehcollins (talk) 13:18, 21 April 2017 (UTC)Carolinehcollins