User talk:Carolineshowardssu98/sandbox

What I want for my page

My wiki page I will be contributing to is "Concentration of media ownership". I would like to be able to edit anything that may be sloppy and or incorrect. If something seems unclear I would like to clarify what is being said. I want to use reliable sources to back up my answers/work.

Bibliography www.huffingtonpost.com/news/media-ownership www.globalissues.org/article/159 www.freepress.net/diversity-media-ownership www.businessinsider.com/these-6-corporations-control-90-of-the-media-in-america-2012-6 www.fcc.gov/media/media-ownership-2006-research-studies-archive

Carolineshowardssu98 (talk) 20:35, 10 November 2016 (UTC)

Hi Caroline,

I'm responsible for editing your page for the peer review. Just some constructive criticism, and I want to come off as positive and friendly as possible when I say this but I've noticed you haven't added much besides asking others for what needed to be added to your page. I don't see any edits done by you or anything added or removed from the page. May I suggest you do some research on some reliable sources and provide some links such as the ones you have included on this talk page in your Bibliography. I would also suggest going through most of the sections and making sure all the links work and that they are reliable sources and are accurate. Check for any grammar issues and when possible add a new section with what you have from your research in the bibliography if it pertains to anything in terms of a new subject or content. There has to be something you can add to the page or correct that may not be 100% accurate. I Just don't want to come off as rude, and if you have done edits or things I may have missed, please let me know! That is all for now. Hope this helps! BPike1 (talk) 03:10, 4 December 2016 (UTC)BPike1