User talk:Carolmshaw

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Rosefield Hall
Carol, welcome to Wikipedia. I've had a look at your article and there's a few things I'd comment on. 1) Notability - why is this building notable. For other buildings it's often becasue they are listed or scheduled ancient monuments. That doesn't appear to be the case here.  I know that the phrase "most important building within the [Hesketh Road] conservation area" is from http://modgov.sefton.gov.uk/moderngov/Data/Planning%20Committee/20060531/Agenda/Appendix%2010.pdf but I think it needs to be put into context so if your article says something along the lines of "Considered by Sefton Borough Council to be the most important building in the conservation area because . . ." that should be sufficient.

2) You have cut and pasted quite a lot of quotes from the planning report. Phrases like "its size and spatial rhythm, which pronounces a strong sense of arrival into the Hesketh Road Conservation Area"  and "gives it a distinct air of superiority" are likely to be considered  examples of puffery. If there are multiple sources that describe the building in such terms then fair enough but don't use it on the basis of a single source. There is also a policy of writing articles in your own words, I think you'll find that it will look better if it is written that way.

3) Layout. The order of things might want to be moved about.  WP:LAYOUT gives a lot of help but in a nutshell, a lead section summarising the article and establishing the notability of the building; followed by sections on it's construction including who by, when, materials and style; history e.g. other owners, other uses; current use and modern history e.g. the conversion to apartments; then finally the references.

If you want a hand or explanation of anything just leave a message on this page and I'll see it. NtheP (talk) 14:00, 16 December 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Rosefield Hall (Southport, England) concern
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Your article submission Rosefield Hall (Southport, England)


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 04:02, 28 September 2013 (UTC)