User talk:CarrNayeli/sandbox

Neal's Edits
the work you've done is very good. I would suggest adding a citation for the Likert test just for clarity. in addition to that, I think it would create a more complete dialogue on the topic if you used a few more sources in each of your sections. A simple grammatical correction would be that you don't need to cite the same source four times in the first section, I think it would be fine to site it just once. I did a quick search on PubMed for research about testosterone and competition and I found some articles that might be of interest. There are some articles about the role of testosterone in females as well, which could help with creating a discussion of testosterone's effects in multiple distinct populations.