User talk:Carriefish2021/sandbox

Overall I think you have done a lot of good research on this topic! First off, I would redo your in text citations so that they are in the format of a numerical exponent to match the formatting of the wikipedia article. I see you list some of the sports that may have more of a risk factor of developing CTE, but this information is already in the epidemiology section of the CTE article. I liked your section on the definition of the disease, I think that is good information to add to the article. I see a few direct quotes in your writing and I would try to eliminate these and summarize the information in your own words. I think your information is good, I would just take some time to proofread to make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and organized so that your ideas are clearly understood by the reader.