User talk:Carrieledingham/sandbox

Carrieledingham (talk) 15:43, 6 September 2016 (UTC) I have had to amend the Personal Life and Death section of the so-called biography on my father. Some of it was incorrect, some of it is untrue and I particularly disagree with the the  line:- "Despite his record of success as a producer, he died in relative obscurity without receiving any public recognition from any British institution"

I have added two paragraphs

"A shy, self-effacing man, Paramor was a highly respected musician and record producer although he always preferred to stay out of the limelight. Following his death BBC Radio broadcast an hour long tribute to him and his music. EMI took a full blacked out page in The New Musical Express leaving only the words Norrie Paramor (1914-1979) "Thank you for the guidance, the inspiration and the music". The SOS (Stars Organisation for Spastics) organised a Memorial Concert at Fairfield Halls in Croydon, attended by HRH the Duchess of Kent and many of the artists who Norrie had worked with and who also performed.

On 22nd September, 1982, a posthumous award was presented to Joan Paramor by The Guinness Book of 500 Number One Hits in recognition of Norrie Paramor having produced more of the First 500 Number Ones than any other producer."

I save these alterations but each time I go back in they have been deleted and we are left with "Despite his record of success as a producer, he dies in relative obscurity without received any public recognition from any British institution". Although not a household name today, he was still relatively well-known when he died and this line is hurtful to the family.

How can this information be amended so as to be factual and correct?Carrieledingham (talk) 15:43, 6 September 2016 (UTC)