User talk:Carson Neel

July 2019
Please do not use styles that are unusual, inappropriate or difficult to understand in articles, as you did in List of Attack on Titan characters. There is a Manual of Style, and edits should not deliberately go against it without special reason. Thank you. Viewratio (talk) 23:13, 4 July 2019 (UTC)

"… is a main character"
It looks like all of your edits involve going through list-of-characters pages and adding judgments about who is "a main character", "the protagonist", etc. This information is almost always unnecessary. A section titled "main characters" does not need to start each entry with "XXX is a main character". It's also sometimes controversial, which means that on the rare occasions it _is_ important to clarify whether someone is or is not a main character, it probably needs to be cited to a reliable source.

Also, your edits often ruin the grammatical structure of the first sentence. You might want to consider using a grammar checker plugin. The first one I tried was able to highlight all of your errors, explain them more simply than I could have done, and even provide a suggested fix. (The suggestion wasn't always the best way to write the sentence, but it was always at least an improvement.)

I don't mean to sound too negative or scare you off Wikipedia or anything. I'm just another editor like you (and I'm not even logged in). So, don't trust me; check out the MoS and the relevant project guidelines for articles you're interested in, or look around at existing examples. Writing for Wikipedia's style can be a little weird at first, but I'm sure you'll get the hang of it quickly. --157.131.246.136 (talk) 03:51, 13 July 2019 (UTC)