User talk:Casey waggett/Median raphe nucleus/Lululemmon Peer Review

I would consider adding a picture of the brain to show where the median raphe nucleus is, for those who may not know where the V Afferents of the motor nucleus is to compare. I would move the sentence that states, "The median raphe nucleus projects extensively to the hippocampus, which is known to be essential for the formation of long-term memory." to the first paragraph because this is a broad sentence that could be expanded on more. For example, what does projecting on the hippocampus mean? Also, the sentence that states, "One recent study found that this raphe-hippocampus pathway plays a critical role in regulation of hippocampal activity and likely associated memory consolidation processes," could be moved to the research section of the article. Delete I would add a photo of where the median raphe nucleus is located in the brain and how its location in the brain relative to other structures is conducive to its function. You could also extend on this topic by discussing the evolutionary basis of the median raphe nucleus and how it supports the survival of those organisms that have it.