User talk:Caseyduran7/sandbox

Hi Casey, Your article looks great!

3 positives: 1. I thought that the definition of sadism is great because it is descriptive but to the point. 2. Your article is clearly well researched as evidenced by the number of references listed. 3. I like how you described each subtype in a different subheading.

3 to work on: 1. Maybe you could expand more on the familial patterns section. 2. I saw a few proofreading mistakes under the removal from the DSM heading so you might want to go through the section. 3. Maybe join add the personality traits linked to the sadistic personality disorder section to the characteristics of sadistic personalities heading?

All in all I thought your article was interesting and well written and I enjoyed reading it!

Cgandolfo (talk) 18:33, 19 November 2012 (UTC)