User talk:Caseyfarrissey

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Peer Review #1
Hi Casey, This article with packed with information which is a good thing but at times it felt a little dense. I think you could shorten the beginning section and give a briefer idea of what the article is about. I would also consider adding links to the wiki pages of the court cases that you have in bold, in case a reader wants to know more. You have tons of information and did a lot of research and remained unbiased through your whole article which I thought was extremely impressive. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Megansmith34 (talk • contribs) 00:01, 13 April 2016 (UTC)