User talk:CasperCasey/Propaganda through media

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Nice work, CasperCasey. This is definitely important information to include, but it would help to know where exactly you think it should be included. The way to do this most easily is to follow the directions Wikiedu offers: copy (using the edit version of the article itself) and paste the section that you intend to edit into your sandbox. Then publish. Then edit that with your changes and publish again. This way it is much easier to see what edits you have made using the view history tab. Be sure to leave comments with what you are doing each time.

If you want this to be seriously considered for addition to the article by the Wikiedu folks, you might want to edit this for repetition. There are several places where you repeat the same phrasing unnecessarily. Encyclopedic language should be very clean and concise. Finally, your first sentence is a run-on. Make it two. --Jbdolphin (talk) 02:27, 18 May 2021 (UTC)